Waiting for Kirs to post his start ^^

My 20 sec part ready

Very nice...but:

The start road-to-platform transition is unsmooth...I think it would be better like this.
And that CP after the loop is too far from the loop exit...move it closer to the loop exit,so that right after you exit the loop,you can turn .

Go and fix that,and make it longer

I made it longer and changed the things what you sayed i love tracks with 30 sec so i dont want make it longer

Hmm...interesting...but still not good...try addind another booster on that hill turn,and remove the big ramp,add a smaller one...delete that finish and the road after CP...and just continue strait from the CP...try that and come back then

here i tryed new end but i think still bad

not bad...I like what you did...but that uphill comes too early...just make that uphill longer and make the map go trough the loop again...it's a nice re-use

something like this :

Just a slight delay...Kris has some exams so we will continue later .

Ok i had some time today
dont know how to add camera change there now

a bit hard finish...but I like the challenge in it
now try to make scenery at the start...only the first 10seconds of the map...so that I can see what can you do ^^